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Ok. Here’s an excerpt of one of the books i’m working on. I’ve only spell checked it basically, not much other editing has been done. Its about half the first chapter. I’d appreciate any comments, bad ones too and advice on what i am doing wrong from readers and especially published Authors 
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Ooooo…
I like.
Where’s the rest of it?
Is this what you’re working on during Sven?
Would love to read more.
I sent you an email about it.
Keep going, I really want to read the rest.
You’ve got a good foundation. With a bit of spit & polish, you’re on your way.
I agree with Rachel. Where’s the rest?
Heh thanks ladies. There isn’t too much more, a prologue and more at the start and end of this chapter. As for Sven, I’m not sure. I should start with this one I suppose since i’ve started and the characters are there and i know what their doing and most of where they are going. But then there’s that idea that came out the other day too…and I’ve got a 5 book series started as well with a few chapters and lots of planning. heh. My down fall. Good at planning and starting, not so good at keeping going.
Maybe you should use Sven to plow through to the end of this one. You need to finish one, even if it’s not perfect you can always go back and fix it. You need to finish this one anyway cause me and Nic are gonna hassle you until you do.
I envy your guts in putting it up on the blog, couldn’t do that myself but I’m getting better at sharing. Keep writing, I’ll be on your back right through Sven.
Oh yeah! I like! I’m with sis–you are on your way. I’d like to know more. A whole lot more! Gimme, gimme!